Your homepage looks cool but doesn’t explain what the product does.
This is just one man’s take:
“The Human-AI Operating System” is marketing vapor. “Harmonize your workflow” tells me nothing. The three feature boxes—“Intelligent Automation,” “Seamless Integration,” “Adaptive Learning”—could describe any SaaS product from the last five years.
I had to scroll to the demo video to understand you’re building event-driven workflow automation. That should be the first sentence.
Compare to your explanation: “Shopify order comes in, system checks integrations, shows you the route, one button completes all actions.” That’s clear. That’s what someone needs to know in five seconds.
Your homepage buries the actual value under abstraction. No one knows what “harmonize” means operationally. They don’t know what problem you’re solving or what actions the system takes.
Strip out the philosophy. Lead with the mechanism: “When business events happen, we route them across your tools automatically. One click fulfills orders, notifies teams, updates calendars. The system learns your patterns and gets smarter over time.”
Then show the integrations—Gmail, Shopify, Stripe, Slack, Asana. People need to see “oh, this connects the tools I already use.”
The cosmic language (“reshape how humans and AI collaborate”) actively obscures what you built. You’re competing for attention against a thousand AI startups using identical words. Specificity is your only advantage.
What does the product actually do in the first 60 seconds after someone signs up?
Your homepage looks cool but doesn’t explain what the product does.
This is just one man’s take:
“The Human-AI Operating System” is marketing vapor. “Harmonize your workflow” tells me nothing. The three feature boxes—“Intelligent Automation,” “Seamless Integration,” “Adaptive Learning”—could describe any SaaS product from the last five years.
I had to scroll to the demo video to understand you’re building event-driven workflow automation. That should be the first sentence.
Compare to your explanation: “Shopify order comes in, system checks integrations, shows you the route, one button completes all actions.” That’s clear. That’s what someone needs to know in five seconds.
Your homepage buries the actual value under abstraction. No one knows what “harmonize” means operationally. They don’t know what problem you’re solving or what actions the system takes.
Strip out the philosophy. Lead with the mechanism: “When business events happen, we route them across your tools automatically. One click fulfills orders, notifies teams, updates calendars. The system learns your patterns and gets smarter over time.”
Then show the integrations—Gmail, Shopify, Stripe, Slack, Asana. People need to see “oh, this connects the tools I already use.”
The cosmic language (“reshape how humans and AI collaborate”) actively obscures what you built. You’re competing for attention against a thousand AI startups using identical words. Specificity is your only advantage.
What does the product actually do in the first 60 seconds after someone signs up?